Hi max I found out something YOU HAVE FORGOT YOUR CAPITAL LETTERS!!!!
And commas.
On Monday the 24th of Feb it was my Birthday.
Olivia. D got a lovely haircut we can not wait to see you
Max you need to put capital letters for names of places and people. Make sure you check before you publish because here it looks like as if you rushed. 🙂
Hi Max,
This blog is excellent ,apart from a few little mistakes in each paragraph.
We couldn’t understand some sentences because of wrong spellings, also you mist a capital letter which made Mr . Shuttleworth angry.
Hi Max it’s Billy you have made lots of mistakes, like anyway is one word and London without a capital letter.
we have been learning about a short film called The Piano.It’s like an old guy playing the piano and he goes through stages of his life, bye Max see you soon.
Hi max this is Pez. The blog was really good but big letters are across the screen and they were in the way and it was hard to read. In school were learning about cricket in PE and in maths were doing angles and Mangahigh challenges. You missed a lot of capital letters and you spelt a lot of words wrong. We really miss you Max and we wish you could come back sooner. You should check back every blog you do. BYE MAX!!!!!
Hi, this is Finn sounds like your having a great time and the weather sounds really good, wish I could say that about the weather here!!
There are quite a lot mistakes let me point a few out E.G; You spelt mr.shuttleworth like that when it’s supposed to be like this Mr.Shuttleworth.
What’s Happening in London?
Over here we have started a new PE sport it’s cricket but because it’s raining so much we don’t have a good chance of going out to do it, but that doesn’t matter that much. We’ve also started a new topic it is Hinduism and life cycles.
Can’t wait till you come back!!!
PS: Mr.Shuttleworth is going to kill you when you get back!! BYE!!
Hi max have not spoken for a long time, we miss you lots, and it near time for you coming back, also you missed capital
letters. By the way be prepared because Mr .Shuttleworth he said he is going to shoot you with a nerf gun.
Well you keep on doing spelling mistakes like missing CAPITAL LETTERS for NAMES!
What happened at the end of your blog. you forgot capital LETTERS.
You didn’t have capitals for Mr Shuttlewoth.
Anyway should only be one word.
Hi max I found out something YOU HAVE FORGOT YOUR CAPITAL LETTERS!!!!
And commas.
On Monday the 24th of Feb it was my Birthday.
Olivia. D got a lovely haircut we can not wait to see you
Max you need to put capital letters for names of places and people. Make sure you check before you publish because here it looks like as if you rushed. 🙂
Sorry I forgot to write bye so bye.
Remember your capital letters.
Hi Max,
This blog is excellent ,apart from a few little mistakes in each paragraph.
We couldn’t understand some sentences because of wrong spellings, also you mist a capital letter which made Mr . Shuttleworth angry.
Hi Max , you need punctuation and group 1 spellings because 1:you omitted SIMPLE punctuation! 2: you have approximately 4 mistakes, all SIMPLE!!!
Hi Max it’s Billy you have made lots of mistakes, like anyway is one word and London without a capital letter.
we have been learning about a short film called The Piano.It’s like an old guy playing the piano and he goes through stages of his life, bye Max see you soon.
Hi max this is Pez. The blog was really good but big letters are across the screen and they were in the way and it was hard to read. In school were learning about cricket in PE and in maths were doing angles and Mangahigh challenges. You missed a lot of capital letters and you spelt a lot of words wrong. We really miss you Max and we wish you could come back sooner. You should check back every blog you do. BYE MAX!!!!!
Hi, this is Finn sounds like your having a great time and the weather sounds really good, wish I could say that about the weather here!!
There are quite a lot mistakes let me point a few out E.G; You spelt mr.shuttleworth like that when it’s supposed to be like this Mr.Shuttleworth.
What’s Happening in London?
Over here we have started a new PE sport it’s cricket but because it’s raining so much we don’t have a good chance of going out to do it, but that doesn’t matter that much. We’ve also started a new topic it is Hinduism and life cycles.
Can’t wait till you come back!!!
PS: Mr.Shuttleworth is going to kill you when you get back!! BYE!!
Max you for got to do capital letters at the banging.
Hi max have not spoken for a long time, we miss you lots, and it near time for you coming back, also you missed capital
letters. By the way be prepared because Mr .Shuttleworth he said he is going to shoot you with a nerf gun.
miss you lots Olivia. D
By the way on the 7th of march ,you are invited to go tonerment.