JAHKEEMA

Posted on January 21, 2013 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to JAHKEEMA

  1. guemb says:
    January 21, 2013 at 2:32 pm

    lovely
    just afew mistakes jj
    b0uthi

  2. ellis says:
    February 5, 2013 at 11:44 am

    Really good work and idea but work on the proper use of speech marks such as:
    “Eat this chocolate eat it now or take some cake!” the girl cackled evilly.
    Also missed out a few words and capital letters but apart from that it was fantastic.

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