Well done Max but you forgot you CAPTIAL LETTERS! Plus you spelt which wrong ! We all miss you and wish you could come back sooner .Peace out enjoy your time there !!!!!
Well done Max but you have forgot your CAPITAL LETTERS! you have wrote a lot there but you had spelt which wrong We all miss you loads well we all wish you could come back today! Peace out:][:
That’s sounds awesome but you could use some comma’s, and full stops to make your sentences smaller. Jamie your friend in Perseus. :][:
Mr Shuttleworth,
He said you’ll be writing out capital letters and full stops for a month when you get back!!!!!
Well done Max but you forgot you CAPTIAL LETTERS! Plus you spelt which wrong ! We all miss you and wish you could come back sooner .Peace out enjoy your time there !!!!!
Well done Max but you have forgot your CAPITAL LETTERS! you have wrote a lot there but you had spelt which wrong We all miss you loads well we all wish you could come back today! Peace out:][:
Well done Max 🙂
Good use of brackets
Make sure you put capital letters in 🙁
You forgot capitals and full stops.
Well done, you did really well writing this blog, but when I read it I can not breath because they is not enough punctuation.