Hi Max by the way you missed a in capital letter in America.
Hi its Perrie. In school we’ve been learning about the Victorians and Oliver Twist. Today we are going on a trip to S.t Pauls cathedral to have an experience. Is it good in LA? Have you been to Hollywood yet? is the food different there?
Well done Max ,but don’t forget your capital letters for places and things because sir will kill you when you get back to school .PLUS remember to put commas in when you need.
It sounds like you had a wonderful weekend and have a fun time at America!
Tell Stephen happy Birthday.
In our Assembly Callum was Olivier Twist but everybody really wanted it to be you if you was there(I thought you would make a great Oliver twist)
We are going on a trip today and we are going to St. Pauls cathedral(Hopefully it will be fun)
Also you forgot your capital letter and a comma.
Well, it sounds like you had a wonderful weekend and I would love to go to America!
What was your class called?
We have a trip today, we’re going to St. Pauls cathedral and me half of the class are going with Orion and the other half are going with Heracles.
(you mist a couple of full stops and commas)
It’s Max 1) The food is the same but I think the burgers are much better than London and it depends on were you go.2) I live in west Hollywood
3) It’s great in L.A but the wether recently isn’t as good as it was but today is really nice.4) No I do not take a school bus There only for if you live far away.5) The food is great here.6)My class was called Class 4.
bye Missing you guys soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.:(
Make sure you spell your words correctly like american=American. Other than that it was really good 🙂
Really good Max but you forget a lot of capital letters and full stops and more paragraph.
Good max but you spelt next wrong
Hi Max by the way you missed a in capital letter in America.
Hi its Perrie. In school we’ve been learning about the Victorians and Oliver Twist. Today we are going on a trip to S.t Pauls cathedral to have an experience. Is it good in LA? Have you been to Hollywood yet? is the food different there?
.
Hi Max its Billy how you doing in LA have u been to Hollywood yet.
Is the food good or bad.
Well done Max ,but don’t forget your capital letters for places and things because sir will kill you when you get back to school .PLUS remember to put commas in when you need.
It sounds like you had a wonderful weekend and have a fun time at America!
Tell Stephen happy Birthday.
In our Assembly Callum was Olivier Twist but everybody really wanted it to be you if you was there(I thought you would make a great Oliver twist)
We are going on a trip today and we are going to St. Pauls cathedral(Hopefully it will be fun)
Also you forgot your capital letter and a comma.
Well, it sounds like you had a wonderful weekend and I would love to go to America!
What was your class called?
We have a trip today, we’re going to St. Pauls cathedral and me half of the class are going with Orion and the other half are going with Heracles.
(you mist a couple of full stops and commas)
What is nexd and do you take a bus to school.
Hello
It’s Max 1) The food is the same but I think the burgers are much better than London and it depends on were you go.2) I live in west Hollywood
3) It’s great in L.A but the wether recently isn’t as good as it was but today is really nice.4) No I do not take a school bus There only for if you live far away.5) The food is great here.6)My class was called Class 4.
bye Missing you guys soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.:(
Good but TO MANY TIPEOS
Max it sounds like your having a wonderful time but remember to double check your work for spelling mistakes missing you loads Oliver 🙂
Well it sounds like you had a wonderful time at L.A max
How is school? By the way a great blog
School is alright I am missing you loads!!!! thanks oliver Bye
Hi max having a good time here and I hope you are there too.
Missing you loads from The Dark Shadow or Finn