Well done! That was a great piece of writing but maybe you can us some different punctuation instead of full stops all the time. Apart from that it was really good, I liked the bit when the three witches got lost in the valley!
I like the fact that you introduced the charecters very well. It was a neat piece of work. Make sure it makes sense.
Wow I loved your adjectives but I wish at the end you could of explained it better.
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Well done! That was a great piece of writing but maybe you can us some different punctuation instead of full stops all the time. Apart from that it was really good, I liked the bit when the three witches got lost in the valley!
I like the fact that you introduced the charecters very well.
It was a neat piece of work.
Make sure it makes sense.
Wow I loved your adjectives but I wish at the end you could of explained it better.