The return of the midnight feast by Jamie and Callum

3 Responses to The return of the midnight feast by Jamie and Callum

1. curte says:

   January 20, 2014 at 9:46 am

   Be careful of punctuation and remember to all check over your work.
2. hurro says:

   January 20, 2014 at 9:49 am

   Very Good but it would be great to see more adjectives in there next time.
3. abdih says:

   January 31, 2014 at 9:54 am

   Just like what Curte said be carefull with your punction.

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