jamelia the bear letter

Posted on December 13, 2013 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to jamelia the bear letter

  1. whiti says:
    April 20, 2015 at 2:27 pm

    I like the way you wrote it like you was a bear but on the last line of the second paragraph:)

  2. alijg1 says:
    April 20, 2015 at 2:29 pm

    I loved that you used wet warm blood dripping on my nostrils its a very good sentence.
    Whats going to happen next

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