Great rap realy loved the rhymes. But next time try to make your writing a bit bigger so it is easyer to read. Great work from Jessica and Saskia
Great ryhmes, lovin’ the writing colour. A bit more could make my day.
Well done, you thought about the reader it was very classy Teddy and Alex P
It was a bit short, some more will make me happy
great write a bit bigger next time
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Great rap realy loved the rhymes. But next time try to make your writing a bit bigger so it is easyer to read. Great work
from Jessica and Saskia
Great ryhmes, lovin’ the writing colour. A bit more could make my day.
Well done, you thought about the reader it was very classy Teddy and Alex P
It was a bit short, some more will make me happy
great write a bit bigger next time