To Griff,we like the fact you used lots of colourful and bright colours and drew diffrent fireworks. We both drew fireworks
with pastels in our previous classes. We think you could improve your detail and mabey next time add more pictures. from Eva and Endi.
Filkering flames
Intresting sounds
Really big bangs
Exciting sparklers
Wonderful colours
On 5th November
Rokeet bang
Keep you awake
Super fun
Cool colours, but it could be a bit more bright.
To Griff,we like the fact you used lots of colourful and bright colours and drew diffrent fireworks. We both drew fireworks
with pastels in our previous classes. We think you could improve your detail and mabey next time add more pictures. from Eva and Endi.