year 5 Finnley Clarke – Instructions

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3 Responses to year 5 Finnley Clarke – Instructions

  1. edelpozolagnea.206 says:

    Wonderful, creative and imaginative instructions. Columba class very much enjoyed this piece of work’s humour. Great use of features of instructions. Don’t forget to edit your work to add commas and apostrophes, next time. Well done from Columba Class.

  2. mohaa1 says:

    Great work, you’ve added bossy verbs and straigt forward sentences.Next time try to add commas and apostrophes.

  3. aulsb says:

    finn I don’t get it about are your goldfish means

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