Well written with no spelling errors, well done. I think it would be better to save the laughter until the end and say that was sad for the dog to fall in the pond. Could have included more detail about how Steve looked when he emerged from the dirty seaweed.
Well written with no spelling errors, well done. I think it would be better to save the laughter until the end and say that was sad for the dog to fall in the pond. Could have included more detail about how Steve looked when he emerged from the dirty seaweed.