Began well although I didn’t understand the reference to a driver who is not mentioned again. Good idea to have different sized boots to indicate that it was a weird creature rather than human being.
Nothing to indicate why you thought someone had committed suicide and the meaning of the last few words was not clear.
Well done, you tried hard and I really enjoyed reading that story. The best thing I liked was when you said “Wow that is a big foot” . But next time try and use some punctuation.
Began well although I didn’t understand the reference to a driver who is not mentioned again. Good idea to have different sized boots to indicate that it was a weird creature rather than human being.
Nothing to indicate why you thought someone had committed suicide and the meaning of the last few words was not clear.
Amazing Billy I liked the word astonished and that monster created improve in the word didn’t because you spell it wrong.
Well done, you tried hard and I really enjoyed reading that story. The best thing I liked was when you said “Wow that is a big foot” . But next time try and use some punctuation.