fizzys piano poem 100wc week 15

4 Responses to fizzys piano poem 100wc week 15

1. guemb says:

   January 14, 2013 at 5:02 pm

   So nice.
   It made feel what you wrote
   Is it mean to rhyme.
   I like the red verse ( be inspired by…..).
2. guemm says:

   January 18, 2013 at 12:25 pm

   I really like the bit when you wrote [ gracefull meliody to any ear ]
3. armse says:

   January 21, 2013 at 12:18 pm

   I really like your peace of writing but it took me a while to read it because of the bright colours on the letters.
4. jackt says:

   January 21, 2013 at 12:21 pm

   i liked your 100wc but you puntuation from but you tried your best from Tommy

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