I liked the language you used- particularly the simile ‘like a python strangling its prey’. Though the tenses seemed a bit mixed up- past & present were both used. But it was really funny and I liked it a lot.
I love the descriptive words you use to describe how much they hate each other.
Try not to use The at the start of a paragraph.
I love how much you use inverted commas.
I liked the language you used- particularly the simile ‘like a python strangling its prey’. Though the tenses seemed a bit mixed up- past & present were both used. But it was really funny and I liked it a lot.
very nice
I love the descriptive words you use to describe how much they hate each other.
Try not to use The at the start of a paragraph.
I love how much you use inverted commas.