Jack and the Tunnel

Posted on July 14, 2021 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to Jack and the Tunnel

  1. merht says:
    July 14, 2021 at 9:26 am

    i like it because you use a a cap-til

  2. potte says:
    July 14, 2021 at 9:31 am

    I love how your fronted adverbials fitted perfectly
    I think you should have used some more expanded noun frazes
    I love all of the words that fitted perfectly

  3. romam says:
    July 15, 2021 at 8:25 am

    I like the adjectives.

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