It’s amazing but can you add one more paragragh then it would be a bit better thanks! – Lizzie
I like how it is very good and not to short or not to long.
I really liked how you referred to fairy tales. Though there didn’t seem to be many full stops at all – maybe add a few more per paragraph. The descriptive language was also super.
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It’s amazing but can you add one more paragragh then it would be a bit better thanks! – Lizzie
I like how it is very good and not to short or not to long.
I really liked how you referred to fairy tales. Though there didn’t seem to be many full stops at all – maybe add a few more per paragraph. The descriptive language was also super.