It’s a good story but what you can do to approve is to check some of the spellings and it’ll be a good story
I’m afraid you will have to work on your spelling. Good story though!
Best iv seen so far i think it could make a little more sense
*I like the theme of your piece of text * I like your work but next time read through your work to make sure it makes sense
Really good! Make sure it makes sense though.
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It’s a good story but what you can do to approve is to check some of the spellings and it’ll be a good story
I’m afraid you will have to work on your spelling. Good story though!
Best iv seen so far
i think it could make a little more sense
*I like the theme of your piece of text
* I like your work but next time read through your work to make sure it makes sense
Really good!
Make sure it makes sense though.