lovely and exiting story try some new vocabulary great work
I like the story. However, I don’t see how it is about the about the abandoned house. Good job on no spelling mistakes!
next time put capital letters for I insted of i but its ok
………………………………..good…………………….amazing…………………………….outstanding you were in the amazing bit almost outstanding
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lovely and exiting story
try some new vocabulary
great work
I like the story.
However, I don’t see how it is about the about the abandoned house.
Good job on no spelling mistakes!
next time put capital letters for I insted of i but its ok
………………………………..good…………………….amazing…………………………….outstanding
you were in the amazing bit almost outstanding