Gorilla to the park

4 Responses to Gorilla to the park

1. Wildan says:

   November 26, 2018 at 11:16 am

   I like how you inculed more people and described the people. You need little work on capital.But I really liked your story.
2. enveh says:

   November 26, 2018 at 11:19 am

   very funny a sounds very real roasted banana sounds kind of gross but 🙂 i love your ideas
3. Anas says:

   November 26, 2018 at 11:26 am

   I really liked it!You just need to put punctuation.It’s interesting.
4. Anas says:

   November 26, 2018 at 11:27 am

   I really liked it!You just need to put punctuation.I like the detail

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