Gabriel, great blog I thought it was really funny. I think it would be a good idea that you read and edit your work before publishing. I liked the detail you included by saying the house was on Mr G’s road.
very good story Gabriel it was really descriptive i like the bit where they through bricks at the house i think you
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Gabriel, great blog I thought it was really funny. I think it would be a good idea that you read and edit your work before publishing. I liked the detail you included by saying the house was on Mr G’s road.
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I really like your story its very funny but might need to read over it but very good 🙂 :3
very good story Gabriel it was really descriptive i like the bit where they through bricks at the house i think you
can improve saying Quickly instead of Quick.