Good Story. Try and work on your spelling. I like the fact that you did it about pokemon cards.
This is really funny, Malachi! Next time you should check your punctuation, spellings and full stops. This was really funny so please carry on!
I really like your story but one thing you could work on is the spelling of some of the words still I thought the way you put yourself in it was amazing.
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Good Story.
Try and work on your spelling.
I like the fact that you did it about pokemon cards.
This is really funny, Malachi!
Next time you should check your punctuation, spellings and full stops.
This was really funny so please carry on!
I really like your story
but one thing you could work on is the spelling of some of the words
still I thought the way you put yourself in it was amazing.