it was great a perfect equal to the tiger next time a bit more “battle” loved it idea was great llewelyn
that was really good a bit rushed at the victory bit though still amazing keep it up
This is a great imaginative piece of writing! Next time you could include a wider range of words. It was nice reading this so please continue!
a very nice story next time a bit more suspense it was very exiting
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it was great a perfect equal to the tiger
next time a bit more “battle”
loved it idea was great
llewelyn
that was really good
a bit rushed at the victory bit though
still amazing keep it up
This is a great imaginative piece of writing!
Next time you could include a wider range of words.
It was nice reading this so please continue!
a very nice story
next time a bit more suspense
it was very exiting