Frobscottle country

Posted on April 30, 2018 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to Frobscottle country

  1. jessica says:
    April 30, 2018 at 8:42 am

    Nice story.
    Try and make it flow a bit more.
    Good work on the senses (smell and sight)

  2. Francesca says:
    April 30, 2018 at 9:02 am

    This is amazing Imogen! It’s so colorful and even with out the illustration I can picture it with your descriptive language.
    Next time you could improve your spelling and punctuation.
    This was a really great description of Frobscottle land.
    -Francesca

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