Grandparents by Jack

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12 Responses to Grandparents by Jack

  1. ellis says:

    I like it because it is really funny and has a good use of commas and sentence structure.

  2. keita009.206 says:

    LOVE IT,I LIKED THE WAY YOU USED THAT HOMOUR THAT MAKES ALL OF US LAUGH

    COOL JACK

  3. whith says:

    it was good but it was a bit unrealistic because of the 100 cans of coke and the staying up till midnight.

  4. guemm says:

    I really loved the writing, but it was wierd when it said they let me have 100 cans of coke.

  5. abdim says:

    I really liked the way that it was laid and that you talked about your grandparents cooking

  6. barnb says:

    Well done Jack, amazing sentence structure and good using of commas, Keep up the good work 🙂

  7. jackt1 says:

    Nice story jack I liked the food your grandparents cook mmmm probably the best part

  8. guemb says:

    Well done jack. Lovely work!! 🙂 😀
    love the humour

  9. Candice says:

    Well done Jack amazing work.

  10. lottyx09 says:

    wow I wish I had grandparents like that

  11. dave says:

    like it funny

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