I like it because it is really funny and has a good use of commas and sentence structure.
LOVE IT,I LIKED THE WAY YOU USED THAT HOMOUR THAT MAKES ALL OF US LAUGH
it was good but it was a bit unrealistic because of the 100 cans of coke and the staying up till midnight.
I really loved the writing, but it was wierd when it said they let me have 100 cans of coke.
I really liked the way that it was laid and that you talked about your grandparents cooking
Well done Jack, amazing sentence structure and good using of commas, Keep up the good work 🙂
Nice story jack I liked the food your grandparents cook mmmm probably the best part
Well done jack. Lovely work!! 🙂 😀
love the humour
Well done Jack amazing work.
wow I wish I had grandparents like that
like it funny
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